Maggie (fineeyes) wrote in capribbons,

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About Your Mother

Title: About Your Mother
Description: Atia and Octavia share the joy, pain and surprises of motherhood.
-Unedited; needs intense criticism and beta reading-

Click here to read the story (.pdf)

It's only been two years since I posted! I have started writing again and I need some feedback. I wrote this story as a gift for darkangsty42, but I'd like to post it publicly once it's been torn to shreds and rebuilt by you lovely people :P. If anyone is willing to do more intense beta reading, please let me know! Also, I've been having some issues with my .pdf writer so give me a heads up if it's wonky.
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